This weeks homework was to write about a parent and
child who were separated at birth. What happens when
they meet again for the first time?
Two Coffees, please.
This is a story about a man.
About a man, and a little girl.
This is a story about a little girl, who grows up.
This is a story about a man, and a woman.
And the woman was his child.
He never intended to leave her it never was his plan
He wanted to be a good Father, not like his old man.
Sometimes life just does that, it fills you up with doubt
You never want it to happen, but that’s how it works out.
Many years later he awoke in his bed
A needle sharp thought like an arrow to the head.
It lodged in his brain and would not let go
It stuck in a place that we all know
as the temporal lobe, just behind your left ear.
Where memory lingers, and thoughts become clear.
He thought of her face, remembered her smile
The sound of her laughter, it had been a long while.
The wisp of a memory that might not be real
it might be an echo, of the way he should feel.
Desire took hold, like a hook in his brain
Once it took hold he was never the same.
The parasite grew and became so big
The past consumed him and he started to dig.
It took him three years, five months and two days.
They met in a coffee shop the crossing of ways
A tentative ‘hello’ and an outstretched hand
Music in the background, some old ‘80’s band.
“Hello, Anna. I’m your Father, Salvatore’
Anna searched his face, looking for his story.
Scrutinizing every feature and to her surprise
saw something of herself mirrored in his eyes.
Shyly at first she reaches out- a formal shake.
He wraps two hands around hers afraid that she’ll break
a rush of unexpected feeling he cannot name
Starts in his fingers but then to his shame
he’s full of emotion and holds back the tears
how much has he missed, how many years?
This woman- no baby -left so long ago,
When he was much younger and days were slow.
When the world was a once a much kinder place.
Now here sits a stranger with his lover’s face.
An overwhelming rush of sadness, speeding up like a truck
running him over; devastation, feelings scattered amok.
Anna’s eyes on his face, she was sure he was able
To hear her heart pounding from across the table.
A waitress approached, and put down the water
“Anything else, Sir?”
“Two coffees, please. One for me, and one for my daughter”
Wow, I love the way you tell thus 'story'. The changing structure in the poem feels to me like the confusion of the emotions which I suspect both father and daughter were feeling. I'm not sure but the person seems to change from third to first a couple of times, but maybe that is intentional. all in all a very effective and enjoyable poem. thanks for posting it for us to enjoy.
ReplyDeleteThank you, John. Your opinion is always much appreciated. I you want to add it to 'Gsy poets' please do.
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